Blood and Chocolate Scarp

Heh this is my english culminating project.
and my second attempt to use pencil crayon to colour (because i can't colour with pencil crayon!!! it is horrible!)
won't be updating soon because have projects and things too do and my bro took the scanner and too lazy to get it back. (plus the poster is huge so i wouldn't fit away.)

this is from the book "Blood and Chocolate" by Annette Curtis Klause
i'm not finish yet and will go to scrap

but for now critique please!